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Posted by LauraV on 5/12/06 3:57pm
Excellent website. Concise. Speaks to the exact services your customers want. Attractive. No fluffy words like "reliable." Easy to skim.
Website makes it seem like you do weekend and evenings only. If you are available full time, then change the wording.
If you are not new, say something about your experience. If you are new, never mind.
A few tips:
*Increase the power of your bullet points by saying "We notarize documents related to:"
then list your bullet words without the word documents.
*Say travel fees, not traveling fees. Your fees don't travel - you do. Good idea to not list your rates.
*Lose the notary rotary part. You don't want to make it easy for your customer to find your competition and call around to low ball the fee.
Great job, Joshua!
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