Posted by SarahBeth_CA on 5/23/05 3:03pm
Msg #39728

Intro Letter

Being a newcomer in the business I wrote an intro letter to be included in place of a resume. I was hoping I could get one of the more experienced members to take a look at it and give a critique. TIA

Reply by MaggieMae_CA on 5/23/05 3:16pm
Msg #39732

I would be happy to look it over for you and critique if you'd like to email it to me... [e-mail address]

I have done cover/intro letters (I have two of them) too that emphasize on my past experience. I'd be happy to trade with you to bounce some ideas off each other.

Where in CA are you located again? Promise not to steal my first adopted son if I trade with you?... Hmmmmmm... On second thought, you can steal the first adopted son; he's graduating June 16 and then it's time for college. You can have him for the next four years if you like????

Reply by SarahBeth_CA on 5/23/05 3:28pm
Msg #39740

check your e-mail..

Reply by Charm_AL on 5/23/05 3:30pm
Msg #39745

I'll take a look too ....n/m

Reply by DellaCa on 5/23/05 3:33pm
Msg #39752

Re: I'll take a look too ....n/m

I would love to peek, if I may.

Reply by MaggieMae_CA on 5/23/05 4:01pm
Msg #39776

Replied!

Will send the other letter to you in the next day or two

Reply by SarahBeth_CA on 5/23/05 5:24pm
Msg #39817

Oh I forgot to tell you I am in Victorville...

Reply by MaggieMae_CA on 5/23/05 4:03pm
Msg #39777

BTW SaraBeth_CA...

Your letter was just reviewed and edited by a nationally and internationally published author ;)

No brag... Just fact!

Reply by SamIam_CA on 5/23/05 4:19pm
Msg #39789

Re: BTW SaraBeth_CA...

Do tell - what did you write?

Reply by MaggieMae_CA on 5/24/05 12:14am
Msg #39932

I'm infamous... I mean famous

In my minds own eye... he he he

I've done a lot of inspirational writing and have been published several times in a Catholic magazine published in Canada... St. Anne's. I also have stories which have been published by Guidepost in their Listening to Animals book and stories in the Cup of Comfort book series published by Adams Media.

I've written for and am published in school newsletters and local monthly newspapers. It's a hobby I've enjoyed very much.

Of course, there's the darker side of me that's was published in a men's magazine (under a pseudo name of course!)... Read by over a million open minded men (she says tongue in cheek)... Not even my husband read that story... Wouldn't want to give him any ideas! Interesting story about how that story came about. My best friend and I were looking at Nancy Sinatra's pics in Playboy or Penthouse... Started reading the lame stories and I ended up in a bet with my friend that I could write something better and get it published. $500 later from the publication... and a cup of Starbucks from my best friend (that was the perk of the bet) and my one and only erotica story was published.

Reply by SarahBeth_CA on 5/24/05 12:24am
Msg #39934

Re: I'm infamous... I mean famous

Here ye, Here ye. Let it be known throughout the land. Thou shalt be known henceforth as El Guapo.

Reply by SamIam_CA on 5/24/05 10:33am
Msg #40005

Re: I'm infamous... I mean famous

no habla the espanol. Kay guapo?