Posted by Joshua Basil on 5/12/06 3:28pm
Msg #119505

feedback on my website

http://www.onthegomobilenotaryservices.com

Reply by LauraV on 5/12/06 3:57pm
Msg #119511

Excellent website. Concise. Speaks to the exact services your customers want. Attractive. No fluffy words like "reliable." Easy to skim.

Website makes it seem like you do weekend and evenings only. If you are available full time, then change the wording.

If you are not new, say something about your experience. If you are new, never mind.

A few tips:
*Increase the power of your bullet points by saying "We notarize documents related to:"
then list your bullet words without the word documents.

*Say travel fees, not traveling fees. Your fees don't travel - you do. Good idea to not list your rates.

*Lose the notary rotary part. You don't want to make it easy for your customer to find your competition and call around to low ball the fee.

Great job, Joshua!

Reply by whitesatin on 5/12/06 4:00pm
Msg #119512

Nice job! Make sure when you say 24/7 that you really mean 24/7. You may have people calling you at 3:00 in the morning.

Reply by Joan Bergstrom on 5/12/06 4:48pm
Msg #119522

I like your website and agree with LauraV comments. What I think you should do is beef-up your profile as it is pretty weak. 1. you accept Edocs 2. what kind of equiptment do you have 3. Your attention to detail; you will all documents signed correctly/etc!

Reply by MichiganAl on 5/12/06 5:38pm
Msg #119537

Nice job, simple and to the point. Add just a little space at the end of the page so your text doesn't butt right up to the bottom like that. In web design, a little space is your friend.

Reply by Jennifer_AZ on 5/12/06 6:47pm
Msg #119557

Great Job Joshua! Very professional and to the point!! Now get out there and market, market and market that site! Good Luck to you.

Reply by LkArrowhd/CA on 5/12/06 7:23pm
Msg #119564

Re: feedback on my website- Josh my son's name also

Love the name.....I viewed your website, it may be my eyes but I don't think so, the words appeared somewhat blurry, am I wrong? But I like the site, looks good. Nothing else on my computer is blurry.

Reply by MichiganAl on 5/12/06 9:03pm
Msg #119590

No, you're not having a stroke

It is a little blurry.

Joshua, it looks like you're using a little bit of a drop shadow or effect on the text that is making it look a little blurry. Just go with plain text.

Reply by BarbaraL_CA on 5/12/06 10:22pm
Msg #119596

Re: No, you're not having a stroke

Nice site! Plain and simple and to the point. Now you need to market it all over the internet.
As for the print - it is a bit blurry - it looks like you used all bold. Use bold only on the header info and regular text on the rest.

Reply by BrendaTx on 5/12/06 10:45pm
Msg #119601

Re: No, you're not having a stroke - maybe I am ...

I thought it looked perfectly clear. Very nice, very professional. Clean and tight. Add pages of content to make it get picked up by the search engines and you should be good to go. Somewhere I have posted a list of things to do to make it get found.

Reply by MichiganAl on 5/12/06 11:01pm
Msg #119606

"I thought it looked perfectly clear"

Well, maybe YOU'RE having a stroke and your blurred vision is compensating for the blurred text. Seek medical attention.

Reply by LkArrowhd/CA on 5/12/06 11:30pm
Msg #119615

Re: "I thought it looked perfectly clear"

Well, MichiagnAl maybe I am having a stroke....if you don't see me posting tomorrow, assume I didn't make it. Now my hubby will find some hot young chick to keep him company...

Reply by MelissaCT on 5/12/06 11:36pm
Msg #119616

Re: No, you're not having a stroke - Happy Hour setting in..

Looked clear to me, too. Maybe it's been changed since first posted...Brenda, you do have a list of things to do -- it's on your website. I checked it out earlier...very nice & informative on many different subjects.

Reply by Dee_Fla on 5/13/06 10:53am
Msg #119660

my only question is...are you paying only for a one page domain? there are no other pages to your site. I guess because I'm so use to working on mult-pages domains. Just thought i ask. I had not realized that NR does websites as well.

thanks for sharing!

Reply by asigner on 5/14/06 1:14pm
Msg #119801

Re:i like

the general look and feel -but josh dont set up your site without content. Your site is essentially set up with 3 pieces (which are photos). there are no keywords on the page, the words are placed within the image, saved and then place on the page.
the words on any page are used by search engines for placement. people need to be able to find your site on the internet--example
<p><img border="0" src="images/wait.gif" width="90" height="20"></p>
<p>hey this is josh - an awesome notary</p>
</body>