Posted by Evaline Braswell on 3/9/13 2:12pm
Msg #460272
Profile
OK, I have a few of you in here talk to me about my Profile , I do hope that this is more to Your liking now's , for i looked at the one that i had and yes i did agree needed to have a little work done to it . so i fixed it , i do hope that it is better then it was. and for the way i talk well that is the way i am . I have never said i can spell and sometime i get a little tongue twisted in some things i say , but i do all that i can . sorry if i made any of you mad are thinking that i do not know what i am doing . but like i have said i am new and still learning in what i am doing .
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Reply by 101livescan on 3/9/13 2:32pm
Msg #460276
Who cares what we all think? You want to appeal to schedulers.
You need to find someone to help you craft a profile that compels a scheduler to want to call you. You are in No. 1 position, but your profile has so many errors in sentence structure, spelling and content that it is hard to understand. It simply does not flow.
I wish you luck, you are certainly going to need it from the looks of things. Your website also needs a good edit job.
Since I am not a dentist so I don't do my own root canals. I'm not an auto mechanic, I don't change my own oil. You're not a good writer, you should not write your own stuff, especially if it relates to earning an income, which is what I think you want to do.
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