You were right to ask for other's ideas. It is preferable to try to structure text that does not over use I.
There is a guru editor in our midst who can give you some ideas on how to avoid "I" so much.
My only suggestion is, because I am asked all the time, ARE YOU FIDELITY APPROVED.
On the very first line of your profile somewhere, I would put...
FIDELITY, TRID & NNA CERTIFIED LOAN SIGNING AGENT and your phone number.
These are the very most important bits of information a scheduler would be looking for and they should POP off the screen. They can read further if they want to...
Peggy, I would invest in a professional head shot since you're making bank right now. It will make all the difference in the world to people who are looking for a properly attired, professional to meet with their clients. |
