|INITIATIVE! Confidence! And you didn't ask where to find work - or for my client list (thankfully).|
Remember to review your Handbook meticulously, as many early issues encountered as a newbie is with Notary101 basic stuff about handling your duties as a NP. I found personally that working as an efficient notary first was essentially the first step in . . . uh, efficiency
Your confidence in yourself will increase with gnw (general notary work).
And yes, may want to try bullets or paragraph separation - no more than 2. I didn't want to wade through all that to check for spelling and such. It's the little things that make me smile: proper use of words, like "advise" (verb) and "advice" (noun); dual vs. duel (unless fighting w/your equipment, as we customarily do); perform a notarization (vs. "do a notary") - all go a long way to add to your professionalism and get people to take you seriously.